All Comments on 'Spell Book Ch. 05'

This series is just *chefs kiss*

Was a restaurant it would have atleast 3 Michelin stars

My 2 cents

A very good story. So far, all installments have been 5/5 stars. I like the story line and the interaction between the characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

We need about ten more chapters by the end of the month..... and enough of this cliffhanger jive. TYVM.

shoryuken is the uppercut

hadoken is the kamehameha

Keep it up, it's Awesome so far and I assume it will continue to be.

Better and better. Wonderful and interesting character interactions. You are always answering most of the reader's questions just before he thinks of them. Keeping things grounded with a mundane detail or two about his surroundings or thoughts. Good writing technique. Great storyline. Thanks.

Brilliant. Next chapter please.

Great writing, looking forward to more.

Love the story so far, and looking forward to see how the coven develops!

There's one bit where Dan says something like "I'm cis all the way", which seems incongruous given that the discussion is more about orientation than Dan's own gender. Would "I'm straight all the way" make more sense here?

Would be interesting to see some trans women in the coven though - would their magic start when they realize they are women, or from birth?

Great Storyline.

I think maybe he meant "hadouken" rather than "shoryuken." Minor quibble. More than making up for it, is how Dan doesn't like the word "harem" for reasons of respect and personal agency, a foible of mine as well. Keeping an eye on this series.

I love that the installments are getting longer.great worldbuilder

No other guys please! A lot of foreshadowing going on there. Otherwise 5/5

I appreciate Rileym mostly cares about other folk dating him.