All Comments on 'Spellbound'

very good story , good detail in the story, thanks keep up the writing

Lacks detail and description. Since the kink you're writing about centers on exposure and emotion, it helps to actually let us know what your characters look like naked, to include descriptions of actions/movements/sensations, and to flesh out the characters so we can better see them as people to empathize with and not dolls on a table. If you could describe what your characters look like and include more detail to the events, thoughts, and sensations of the characters, I'm sure it wouldn't just enhance the effect of the genre you're writing for, but make your stories truly shine! <3

This is so cute