All Comments on 'SPF Zero'

Had real potential. Then became just sex, but lacking in eroticism.

Great start. Pease keep going

I really appreciate the feedback, both positive and negative! I would love to hear what you specifically liked, disliked or would like more of. Was it too long/short, etc.? I will work on a sequel and see where it goes. I enjoy the process and it's a great learning experience. It's always Jay in all of my stories and he's pretty open minded so you never know what kind of trouble he's going to find himself in but he always gets what's cumming to him. XOXO