by LitEroCat
This was a very well written story and great to see you posting stories again. I enjoyed reading it although it was a little weird. The sex was hot. Good luck in the contest.
Fairly imaginative; and I just love it when a woman wears three "lays" around her neck...
Just an FYI, I thought your story was great ... except for the consistent misspelling of the word "through." "Thru" is not a word.
THRU —prep. chiefly (US) (adverb, adjective) a variant spelling of through. Collins English Dictionary
If you insist on misspelling ALUMINIUM , COLOUR, etc., I guess we just have to agree to disagree. What's that about a common people separated by language? If only we can get thru this....