All Comments on 'Splendour In The Grass Ch. 01'

..unless your planning to update soon.

I like what I read so far but need more story to decide my vote.

Thank you and can't wait for the update.

good start... continue on

Keep on writing and maybe make your chapter a little longer. Would like to see what happens next.

Great job hope more is to come soon

I hope you write more chapters soon i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!

That's what we need to decide although you are well encourage to keep it up! good job so far!

Interesting ^-^ This is a good start and you did a nice job in introducing the female character ^-^ I barely noticed mistakes, if there were. So yeah, keep writing ^-^

good but too short

Looking forward to more.

You've caught my attention :)

Good start!

I enjoyed your short story. I thought how you

described the night on her walk home was so very discriptive. Keep going. Your talented.

on your first submission to Lit. You are off to a really great start w/this first chapter. In fact so good that I'm going to chapter 2 right now. I really just wanted to say Congrats!

Impressed that this is your first submission. Writing is well done, not a lot of errors, for which I am thankful. Great job. I will definitely continue to read. You did a good job of building up so far. :)