All Comments on 'Sportswriter's Dilemma'

by rd75000

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QuinceQuinceabout 8 years ago
Nice one!

Really enjoyed the "nuts and bolts" aspect of this; the sense of how complex and potentially un-sexy a photo shoot can be. Also enjoyed her triumph over the radio guy. Many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good to see you have another story here!

It has been too long, but this story should get you another red star!

Are you going to continue the Community Theater series? I posted a suggestion for your next story in that sequel.

storm_usmcstorm_usmcabout 8 years ago
Great story

Great idea and good execution

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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I'm so glad you've returned. I really enjoy your writing. After reading A Reporter's Dilemma, I sought out other scenarios like this and found none. Broadcast exhibitionism is a great theme that I hope you'll continue with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great Story

I found your story great reading and hope you'll keep on writing stories like this one.

SimonDoomSimonDoomover 7 years ago
Fun story

Very well written and well paced -- the buildup to the end is excellent.

screedbearscreedbearover 7 years ago

This was a very good story, reminds me a little of a movie I once saw it was call Roder or something like that.

You really damaged this story with your ending sex scene. It was all and good until the last sex scene. But you should have stopped when they were found and no gone on,

And the sweet girl, wouldn't she have been pregnant with many years of sex and no birth control?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Cannot wait to see what else you have written !

What a fantastic, well-written, interesting, sexy story. As our antipodes cousins would say 'Good on yer'. Random Robbie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story.

I like that in the end she did her way. Very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There was a true story about a college softball captain who lost a bet and had to pose nude for playboy. Her name was Ashley Valencia.

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wish there were more stories like this

MorevinilaMorevinila5 months ago

good writing - lengthy introduction

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