All Comments on 'Spring Break'

Finish it!!

ok.

But it would've been even greater if he'd shoved his cock up his mother's warm wet ever-loving cunt.

I can't wait to find out what mother does to him with her feet!

Waiting for part 2!

Nice story but misspelled words break things up. As short as this story was, 15 seconds would have caught mussels. 1c

nothing more arousing than a good foot massage....I probably would have fucked you too!

Mom seems to like it also. Don't leave her hanging.

Even with alcohol he seduced her too easy. Wasn't believable enough for me.

nice read but way to short needs to be at least twice as long nice start though

I was always aroused by women who had tight mussells, nothing like a pair of bivalves to get the old juices flowing, and bring a gal or guy to a shuttering organism.

Too easy. Even for low-hanging fruit.

I suppose it's nice that you tried quotation marks...

But fucking hell this was unbelievably shit. No effort whatsoever. And the users giving you positive remarks are just trying to get you to return the favour. They're either insincere or retarded.

Did you write this ridiculously stupid story with your eyes closed? The number of mistakes makes me think you must be about 10 years old. Go read some picture books and leave this site to grown-ups

im sorry but this story was just terrible im not going to even bother reading part 2

Oh dear, I'm sorry but after only 5 minutes I read, 'her tired Mussles.' Mussels, really? I had to give up.