All Comments on 'Spring Break'

this one was above the all. Hope next chapters will be here soon

I really enjoyed this one. I hope you will be adding to the stepmom and landlady stories soon.

Looking forward to more public play.

Amazing

What a sexy story. One of your best. Should have a much higher rating. Hope it Continues

I love your stories. Every time I read one I think it’s my fave then I think back to others I especially liked. What a library you are creating. Lucky Us : j

Just as a not, I love your public exposure, your being deceptively forced, your women—do you think there will ever be a transister in you future— and you precious squeaks of heightened emotion. Oh and of course your writing; you are an excellent crafts boy.

OMG. That is the hottest story ever. I loved it. How I wish I could be Aiden. More please please please.

Absolutely rock hard....so damn hard. Thank you, Aiden

Simply great. I was rock hard reading this story. Thank you for posting it, and hope you will continue it. So many possibilities...

Karen is every man's dream. Loved this story!

hope this will have noex chapter

this type of story is simply the best, i read it several times. Hope next part will be published soon. You are best writer on this site.

Your stories about older strong women stripping younger boys are simply the best. Hope you have lots of inspiration for more chapters and new stories

A fantasy of mine! Please post the next part! I can’t wait to see what she does with him!

this is definitely your best work for me. That part when she is strips him and when she hide his clothes in safe. Incredible, erotic, powerful. I hope you have inspiration for next part.

What a Fantastic story!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next one!!!!!!!!

Good premise.

Well written.

But somehow lacking in details.

Nothing with her breasts? Why?

Nothing with her ass? Why?

She doesn't have him rim her? Why?

And why, pray tell, doe his cock (and balls) have to be small? This adds nothing to the story.

She never asks him if he masturbates. Why?

She never asks him if he watches porn. Or what kind. Or what kind of women he likes to watch. Or if he likes breasts. And what he'd like to do to/with them and have them do to him.

And his eating of her pussy starts abruptly. Has he ever seen one before (other than in porn videos)? Perhaps he needs to admire it. And learn (be told) the different parts. And be told how he should proceed when performing cunnilingus for the first time in his life.

Four stars.

Please write more