All Comments on 'Spring Break'

Composition is Writers' Workshop quality; grammar, spelling, punctuation etc. are quite good as is the developing scenario from beginning to end with the "raison d'etre" lead-in.

Erotic tension was sustained for about half the tale, which--considering that everything developed as expected--was perhaps the most that could be expected. Enjoyed it. Please keep writing.

MLJ

the whole idea of a fluffer is hot to me. so this was fun.

A fun read, well thought out and described.well done. Tactfully addressed dad and daughter too.