by sub500
This is a tremendously well written story! I look forward to future chapters
Wow, I just found this story and made it through the first 7 chapters. What a great story. I love the slow buildup and attention to detail. It is very well written and almost believable. The one critique I might offer is that Mackenzie is become a bit predictable and Sprout (love that name) must be pretty naive to continue to have faith in anything she says. (But yes, I understand that sexual tension makes one not think clearly at times.)
Thanks for posting this. I look forward to reading future chapters and will have to take a look at some of your other stories.
Sprout's manipulation is always the star of the show. I thought his confusion will end by now, but thankfully Erica and Mac know better :)
The moment when Mac opened her lips, LOVED how that turned the whole thing upside down! Brilliant move!
Another great chapter! .. Thank you so much!
Oh you suck man, I couldn’t stop reading till I ran out of story! Great Job LMAO at the end
These stories just keep getting better and better. You set up Sprout’s humiliations so masterfully, more than half the time i don’t see it coming and Mac and Erica trick me nearly as often as Sprout. i absolutely love reading about his humiliation, forced crossdressing & feminization, and domination at the hands of these beautiful, powerful athletic Amazon college students. Gold-standard erotica!
You're such a great writer. And I think Mackenzie might be the most sadistic out of all the goddess-characters.
Honestly, and I know this might not be your style, but I would love a chapter where Sprout finally gets one over on her and Mackenzie is the one who gets defeated and humiliated. It would be interesting. And it'd sate my revenge boner.
I love your writing and your characters, this is my favorite of your stories! I hope we'll get to see another chapter:)