All Comments on 'Squeezed'

Another great submission. Inventive and with good wry humour. Look forward to reading your next story

The first quarter had me laughing non-stop. Great setup for the not-so-hero. The title kind of gave away what was going to happen next though. The ending was unexpected and quite funny too.

Wow you really have a thing for men losing their life through their dicks :D. Loved the humour of the superhero

I enjoyed the description and the building of tension within the story that was ultimately handled by da Sista.

Just a comment about the writing: you provided very nice details regarding all senses except for the sense of smell. I think including this piece might add to the story's allure as in the story with the beyond super sweet perfume smell you used in another story. Just a thought. Great job and thanks. L

Yeah, the "Christian" Crusader got what he deserved here, if how he treated women is any indication...

OTOH, if it were Batman, the Harridan would likely leave him alone, as Batman tended to not hit (or hit on, for that matter) prostitutes, say what you will about him (the women he usually hit were villainesses (like Catwoman and Poison Ivy) who tended to give as good as they got)…

The final scene was darkly funny, BTW...