by sgtklark
You did good. Please dont take to long for the next chapter cauz I need to cum again lol
Good story but just a hint, I am from the South, southern Virginia to be exact and to let you know if you are shooting for realism, Black folk don't really speak like that man. We do use alot of country slang I will admit to that. But it seems that you are mixing new age country grammer with slavery talking terms. Just a heads up brah. But overall I am feeling the series. Keep up the good work with the plot.