by dustbunny69
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. The way the protagonist articulated her desires on the stage was very hot. Well written and extremely erotic. Keep up the good work!
Terrific story -- well written and deliciously steamy. It's always been a fantasy of mine to make love on a stage, with the heat of the theater lights pounding down from above, so your story was, naturally, a huge turn-on. There's just something very tantalizing about the potential of being on display in an intimate moment, even if there's nothing but an empty auditorium beyond the edge of the stage.
Very nice job.