by proseinagarden
The more you tell us about Mor and Suz, the more we want to know. The writing continues to pull us in with neat turns of phrase and the characters are becoming more and more real and full of surprises. I'm looking forward to watching poor Moriah squirm with frustrated desire (especially knowing she and Suzie wind up squirming with extremely fulfilled desire).
A lot of fun; thanks for taking us back to the “formative” times not to mention the teasing. The two characters you’ve created are so rich/believable and the dialogue perfect.