by vanalas
Oh how I love the sweet taste of revenge... It still worries me that she will do something, a she bear when angered is more dnagerous than the male.
Excellent story had me on the edge of my seat!!!
its upon u to prove wrong and oh u can only do it using adrian
if at all he hurts nickolas and make him beg,in away exceeding that of ramon then i will be free with it
and oh try me,i wana see u making it
S.F.L has 99.3% below F.Y which is 100%
oh to those who thought the stories as similar please be alert
LOVE U VANALAS
oh Adrian my fierce adrian
hahahaha vic and jake they were so foolish
hahahahahahaha
oh our sweet granny,am strong she saw the CD so am secure HAHAHAHA POOR CULPRITS
oh that other members damn them
Nick i want him to pay,i want Adriam to make him beg
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha am sori but hahahaaaa
vanalas i love u so
oh that poor george
nice sobbing
oh the activities they ar to do ar mwaaaa yah let them pay -_-!
thank u for accepting our request of agay royal story thank u so
am now sure that i'l get aquality at its best frm my favourite writer
yah i request u to make aprince aplay boy and the pauper boy fierce than ramon
guys how do u see??????
Adrian postponing it only give the evil bitches with more time to ruin his plan. And I would put that video on a cloud service where it would never be lost or destroyed.
it is such a fantastic story I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter bring it on
Hi... As for the royal story... I would rather see the Prince raised with a sense of worth and a respect for the common man and when he meets the love interest (the pauper) the doesn't know who the Prince is and has an elevated sense of worth that he needs to overcome before the prince could ever accept him.
You always see Cinderella as being the good and the kind, how about the Prince being that character this time and the Cinderfella character being more of an ugly sister in her emotions and character and slowly we see the Prince breaking down the uglyness and uncovering the real person behind the facade.
but prince tend to be arrogant so may be aplay,boy prince can
work
since they tend to think they always get what they want
Good story but you are making the Main character do some very stupid stuff.
Instead of choosing love and respect of the family he acts like Jake.
I didn’t wanna read it at first because you have potrayd him as such a looser of a character that everyone practically uses him as a punching bag but couldn’t find any new stories to read , at least in the first few chapters . In this chapter he should have shown the evidence to the family and got rid of Jake and moved out on their own to new home .