All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 08'

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kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Oh how I love the sweet taste of revenge... It still worries me that she will do something, a she bear when angered is more dnagerous than the male.

Excellent story had me on the edge of my seat!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Hmmm, I'm so glad. But I think Adrian is getting too comfortable

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
hahahahahahahahaha...Am sorry but revenge is sweet

its upon u to prove wrong and oh u can only do it using adrian

if at all he hurts nickolas and make him beg,in away exceeding that of ramon then i will be free with it

and oh try me,i wana see u making it

S.F.L has 99.3% below F.Y which is 100%

oh to those who thought the stories as similar please be alert

LOVE U VANALAS

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
Hahahaha my God

oh Adrian my fierce adrian

hahahaha vic and jake they were so foolish

hahahahahahaha

oh our sweet granny,am strong she saw the CD so am secure HAHAHAHA POOR CULPRITS

oh that other members damn them

Nick i want him to pay,i want Adriam to make him beg

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha am sori but hahahaaaa

vanalas i love u so

oh that poor george

nice sobbing

oh the activities they ar to do ar mwaaaa yah let them pay -_-!

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
OH I ALMOST FORGOT TO THANK YOU

thank u for accepting our request of agay royal story thank u so

am now sure that i'l get aquality at its best frm my favourite writer

yah i request u to make aprince aplay boy and the pauper boy fierce than ramon

guys how do u see??????

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That's stupid to do

Adrian postponing it only give the evil bitches with more time to ruin his plan. And I would put that video on a cloud service where it would never be lost or destroyed.

RichBauerRichBauerover 6 years ago
cant wait for next chapter

it is such a fantastic story I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter bring it on

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Hi... As for the royal story... I would rather see the Prince raised with a sense of worth and a respect for the common man and when he meets the love interest (the pauper) the doesn't know who the Prince is and has an elevated sense of worth that he needs to overcome before the prince could ever accept him.

You always see Cinderella as being the good and the kind, how about the Prince being that character this time and the Cinderfella character being more of an ugly sister in her emotions and character and slowly we see the Prince breaking down the uglyness and uncovering the real person behind the facade.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
also good

but prince tend to be arrogant so may be aplay,boy prince can

work

since they tend to think they always get what they want

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good Story but ...

Good story but you are making the Main character do some very stupid stuff.

Instead of choosing love and respect of the family he acts like Jake.

I didn’t wanna read it at first because you have potrayd him as such a looser of a character that everyone practically uses him as a punching bag but couldn’t find any new stories to read , at least in the first few chapters . In this chapter he should have shown the evidence to the family and got rid of Jake and moved out on their own to new home .

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