All Comments on 'Standing before Her'

by Pomeroi

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Adam51Adam51almost 2 years ago

The premise is a bit outlandish. I I can't imagine a partner objecting to masturbate on, unless it interfered withv

Sent mutual sexual activity.

Steve65999Steve65999almost 2 years ago

Great story. We’ll written and very believable. Very erotic. If only that happened to me!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The premise is NOT outlandish. My wife and I do almost this exact thing, on occasion.

Well done!

I look forward to another episode.

Pharmdog7504Pharmdog7504almost 2 years ago

Great first story. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Sue has realized husbands subnisive needs. Started with basics and did not overdo it. He will want to be a good boy again, Sue will use some advanced training techniques.

Cyberweasel89Cyberweasel89almost 2 years ago

"Incredible breasts?" That doesn't tell me anything... I don't know how you, as the author, define "incredible breasts." In fact, overall, it lacks detail and description. It's as if the entire story exists in a void. The characters lack backstory or personality, too. It's erotica and the lack of description and detail is holding back the eroticism.

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