by Pomeroi
The premise is a bit outlandish. I I can't imagine a partner objecting to masturbate on, unless it interfered withv
Sent mutual sexual activity.
Great story. We’ll written and very believable. Very erotic. If only that happened to me!!
The premise is NOT outlandish. My wife and I do almost this exact thing, on occasion.
Well done!
I look forward to another episode.
Sue has realized husbands subnisive needs. Started with basics and did not overdo it. He will want to be a good boy again, Sue will use some advanced training techniques.
"Incredible breasts?" That doesn't tell me anything... I don't know how you, as the author, define "incredible breasts." In fact, overall, it lacks detail and description. It's as if the entire story exists in a void. The characters lack backstory or personality, too. It's erotica and the lack of description and detail is holding back the eroticism.