All Comments on 'Star Crossed'

I'm not quite sure what this was supposed to be. It certainly wasn't erotic.

WTF comes home after years away, fucks his old girlfriend and it ends?

While it seems like this wasnt to everyone’s , I was attempting at creating a series instead of a one off like all my other ones. If it totally blows, let me know. I can leave this as a single and try again for a longer story line for some other plot!

Nice start, I think? His feelings unclear, to say the least. Hopefully this is a chapter one, which is why I gave it a 5. If this is a standalone, I would give it a 2, as there is NO ROMANCE.