All Comments on 'Starfish Ch. 01'

You need to let someone edit your story. Misspelled words and use of wrong person

This is a great concept, reminiscent of a story by Sexgundam6666. I wish however it was longer, with more time given to what you have here. And it also certainly needs editing.

This was fun

The grama need some help but the Story is awsome pls more with breast expansion and lactation