All Comments on 'Stars Hollow: Forbidden Scenes Ch. 01'

If you do decide to make this a series, when there is a character speaking, don't put " Rori:" (or whomever is speaking) before the quote. Say, " Rori said" or " Rori exclaimed", for example. The way you wrote seemed like a play script instead of a story.

It was kind of intended to read as a script.

But if it puts you guys (and gals) off, I'll keep it in mind for the next scene...

You are spot on with both characterizations and dialogue. Please, do NOT leave this series hanging ... uh, dangling ... uh, crap! You KNOW what I mean. This is just what Stars Hollow was really missing all along: sweet, normal, sexy, slutty trollops, ready to get it on with anything on two legs.

It's great. More, please. And soon! :)

hoot! Thoroughly enjoyable - thanks!

Encore, encore. More tv shows would be good

So good, continue with many more.

Outstanding. As a GGs aficionado I can reassure you the dialogue is spot on. You had me right there in my minds eye. Could easily be an actual GGs scene. Straight into favourites and follow ticked. Will be reading more of your work with anticipation. Thank you.

Love how you captured the vibe and speech patterns of the show.