All Comments on 'Starship Isabella Ch. 02'

I Liked it ! The more in depth you go into their lives the better as far as I'm concerned.

The sex is great too , I am s big fan of Rechicker , PartWolf , Fat_Dad and others the story of My Little Ventura is a story I have followed for a few years and the author keeps it interesting as with the others as well. Your story has all the markings of a Great future .

Thanks for the read . 5*'s

txcracker

This was a short chapter, I still liked the story line and the building plot. But the author needs to use spellcheck, syntax and sentence structure editing, in short an editor. The flow of the story is broken by bad grammar and misspelled words. Could use a bit less orgy and more intimacy with a bit of reality. 4 star