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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Plan very well played

Chapters 1 and 2 had me leaping like a frog. until the end of Chapter 2 where it came together. Chapter 3 has a continuation plot and a very well thought out plan of attack. Keep thinking and continue to write, look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The chapters are getting short, Still needs an editor. 4 star for effort hope there's improvement.

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Happily retired and interested in reading and writing. Update 12/29/21. Cancer in esophagus, lungs and brain. Quite a setback. I'm in good hands and and receiving treatment at MD Anderson. Please excuse the typos. My hands don't always do what my brain tells it to.

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