All Comments on 'Starship Isabella Ch. 06'

The story is pretty good, needs a little bit of realism less fantasy in the sex. AND please learn the proper use of the word laid, many times the correct word would have been lay or lie. Get the dictionary out and read up on the definitions better yet write the definitions down to better integrate them to memory. You need an editor, at the very least use a spell checker. That would at least catch a few of the mistakes. Personally I would go back correct my mistakes and replace the story segments with the corrected version and make the stories more readable and more enjoyable. As I said I like the story so 4 stars.