by Xantu
Pretty ho-hum and so what boring. Needs some kind of actiosurroundings. Not just a continuous dialog of how the woman slowly adjusts to the alien and her new surroundings.
This is not only a comment on this chapter but on the story as a whole so far. I really love it. It's a very thoroughly written one that focuses on more then only action or sex.
I hope you will write more chapters.
Thank you for sharing this story. it triggered many emotions and deep thoughts. Again thank you.
Story is so beautiful and touching that I nearly cried, especially when she wanted to let go of her previous life to love xeno. I have a small request though, can you write a short and detailed story on how erm, they mated? I love monster erotica and this would be cherry on top. Thanks!
Very sweet and clever. Well written, nicely developed and nicely paced. Thank you for the diversion. I look forward to a follow up story set 80,000 years in the future when they go back to earth to get a new member for a ménage a troit. Being enough time for enough generations to have allowed some evolution of the human species they find some surprises. I'm sure your imagination can flesh out the rest.
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A lovely story, more about love than sex. I recently lost my wife of 37 years, and her tender memories of her husband are very moving.
I’ve been thinking a lot about this story. The living space was unlike anything I’ve ever read, great novel idea for an alien setting. Spending 150 years in a little foggy swamp with a slimy mind-reader might be considered torture. In her place I’m not sure if I’d be grateful, flattered, or resentful. The ending was both sweet and disgusting, a difficult pair.
I think this story is really good and look forward to the next chapter
This was such a lovely story. It was so original, so inventive in even the smallest details; I was often brought up in amazement at how basic technical issues were resolved. But what kept me reading most of all was the two characters. Once I forgave Xeno for the abduction, I grew to appreciate so much his gentle and loving nature. And Revekah: could there be a finer representative of humanity to send to other worlds?
This was such a joy to read. I appreciate your dedication to detail in the exploration of sensory and emotional communication between Revekah and Xeno. It is amazing that your story used such a gentle pace yet felt quite rivetting and engaging throughout. I found their shared internal dialogue and exploration quite erotic as you unfolded a new aspect of their connection. I do hope there will be a Starship Traveler Part 2. thank you
I am not a fan of sci-fi and almost didn't start reading this series. But I am so glad I did. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you!
i enjoyed this story of understanding,hope and love very much.it had plenty of rich background details,with an interesting storyline.i adore tales with a devote male. one who is willing to wait,woo and work for his female's acceptance.the key to this unconventional relationship was communication.a lovely fable as per usual,ms xantu.thank you very much.annay.
I haven't enjoyed many of the sci-fi stories but you have made a convert of me! That was a great series. I will be paitently waiting for Starship Traveller Part II.
What a wonderful love story. I'm sorry to see it end for now and will be patiently waiting for more when you return to it.