All Comments on 'Starting Something New'

by Mircalla

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Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 5 years ago
And it all started with a charcoal stick

It appears there may a lot more than life drawing going on. Perhaps their coupling will lead to romance rather than just a quick fuck. Hope so.

Good luck in the contest.

maddictmaddictalmost 5 years ago
Drawn together

"I thought it might take longer to bring out your more passionate side,"

I'm not disappointed either, although I expected Jane to be drawing Philips erection before she felt it. I think this needs another chapter to fully explore Jane's desires.

Disapline, ? I like the idea, you have already held her chin and she follows commands even though she was unsure of herself.

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Taken a couple of years off from writing in an erotic fashion but have come back to it - at least for a little while. As always, I appreciate anyone reading anything I've written - a huge thank you for taking the time to do that - and I hope you enjoy it.