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All Comments on 'Starting the Affair'

by markmac3465

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
not good.

Don't bother with a second chapter until you have learnt more about writing stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I thought it was really good and want more!

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