All Comments on 'State Visit'

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Sierra_m_kiloSierra_m_kiloover 13 years ago
Great read!

That was a thoroughly enjoyable read--story, characters, tech, and sex. Keep up the good work!

cayoviolistcayoviolistalmost 8 years ago
Enjoyable Read

Just found this story and enjoyed it very much. Just one thing that bothered me. Unless the train station is artificially vibrating the platform, a maglev train in a vacuum tube will not produce vibrations, much less ones that can be felt. With the sci-fi setting it jarred my immersion a little bit.

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