All Comments on 'Stay for the Summer Ch. 02'

Very well done. Extremely slow and sensual. You paint vivid pictures of both characters.

The polish is lacking. I've seen several times where he is inplace of HER.

So far I love it. But, you definitely can't end it at this point. You are only in the middle at best and just getting really hot..

Too slow, nothing really happened, seemed like just average days, went nowhere.

Can't wait until the next chapter. Good build up

Not to be rude, but have you ever heard of fucking?

First off, I wanted to address Ginny's virginity. In one of the paragraphs she's lamenting the whole first time experience thing claiming that it always goes wrong. She suggests that maybe she should just lose her own virginity to one of her toys that she calls "Bob". Then a few paragraphs later, Doug has her shove his own toy up his ass and Ginny has Doug fully insert a toy in her cunt that could not possibly go there if her hymen was still intact. You need to work on keeping your facts straight in the story.

So now we have arrived at the end of the second installment and where are Ginny and Doug in their relationship? Except for the one time that Ginny sucked her brother's dick and swallowed his cum, all they ever do is jack off together or finger each other. They have no deeper emotional feelings for each other than other siblings who are not having sex together. Hell, I was hoping that at some point Ginny would at least claim that her "nightly" was filled with thoughts of Doug doing her. But evidently it's nothing more than a desire to get off and there's nothing connecting her or her brother to each other. It's just boring sex to bust a nut. 1/5

when will chapter 3 be released?

I'm sorry but this story is another boring story where's the fucking part of the story I gave it a one Star

Good read, To the other reader that made a comment on her virginity. She's the one that said she was a virgin, in her mind when she said virgin she likely means no penises have been here. Hyman intact and virgin are not the same. A tampon can break a hyman but that female would still be a virgin. Part 3 please and move the story along. Was she masturbating so he would hear and break her door down and take her does she want to feel his fat cock and is getting frustrated

Great story, up until the anal toy was introduced. Too gay for me, but I'm not a fan of prostate exams either.