All Comments on 'Steamy Shower with Step-Daddy...'

I lost interest st the 9 inches part. Pure monkey Fucking.

1 star

DragonRider55

I sure wouldn't have minded being your step dad

I could only give this story a single star. You really need to spend some time looking at how some of the other authors in this genre craft their stories, before you try writing anything else.

Step dad should give her something special--a baby bump

I liked it. Kind of fell offf mama left in hall easy sudiced mama dindt check in on hubby would have lead to a 2 nd invilving mom goog job.

Good job on your first story. It could use a bit more explanation for continuity. IE if dad is going to his knees before eating pussy, just to give readers a picture of what is going on. Also I think sucking his thumb is a typo since he’s using both hands on her thighs, so it should probably say tongue.

You’ll probably get lots of negative feedback, but just see how many ppl are reading and favoriting your story and don’t get discouraged. 🙂

Mmmmmm fuck