All Comments on 'Stepdad's Punishment'

Going from pure hate to lust in two minutes after just one touch between her legs? Yeah right.

Defies any sense of a realistic progression. If you were too lazy to write enough to explain the change in her attitude toward him, you should have left it on the back burner until you managed it. As is, it is totally unbelievable.

Sex is temporary, gaming is forever

While not a total shit show it definitely needed more work... the switch from hate to want was unbelievable and rushed. The concept and switch of ungrateful bitch to proper submissive slut was like a bad porn. I hope you put more thought into your next story

Exceed little story, I’d be happy to read the next chapter. Does she take more punishment? Will mommy find out and accept it? Maybe she will have to hear her stepdad take her mom in the same night he takes her. Does she have any little friends who can be blackmailed into subservience? What will happen with all that raw sex - Will she and mommy get pregnant at the same time?

It sucks.

she needs it in her ass

It's not steamy.. We too know that he fucked her and the process but thr word the literature... Weren't good enough to make someone wet or horny

.. More steamy things are required