All Comments on 'Stepping Out Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

His intent stare - perhaps you were trying for his intense stare?

Gave you a 4, a genervous 4 since it was your first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Please write more.

AHNuts00AHNuts00over 1 year ago

Captivating writing starting with real action from the opening phrase! It was real enough my mouth was watering with my stiffening cock! Keep writing!

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