All Comments on 'Stepping Over The Line Story 02'

by jmc11

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
excellent writing

Loved your story. Good descriptive qualities, well paced, believable and well thought out sexy tale. A little more physical description of Tina would have been good. Please keep them cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

This is wild please continue.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
oh great

another one deleting negative comments

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic Competition!

Two couples engage in a game of one upmanship as they exchange DVD each couple trying to out-do the other. Things get hot and steamy as the competition heats up. Hot Read!

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