All Comments on 'Steps from love'

[16.04.23]

Very sweet und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

would have liked a longer version-more time for the build-up and reveal, more time for MC to get comfortable with the situation before going all in, then longer and more descriptive physical scenes. Basically, I just liked the story but wanted MORE. What can I say, I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Would have been better to tell us about the warning before they got together. That would have helped.

Also, while various states have restrictions on step siblings and marriage, it's only completely illegal in Virginia.

I too would have liked it to be a good bit longer. A goox story but seems rushed because it is so short. Hopefully we can look forward to more of your writing.

Decent, but lacking enough detail and emotions in the middle of things to give it that jei ne sais quoi. A little too much telling us things and not enough showing and having us feel things. A little rushed, as others said. 4*