All Comments on 'Stepsister's Sleepover Pt. 04'

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amepaculamepaculalmost 2 years ago

This sounds like the end of the series. GREAT JOB! 5* on all 4. I wouldn't be upset however, if you chose to put a tag ending, a coda mind you, on the future of Jeff, Chrissy, and Jenny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was a fun story, I liked the ending! If you ever decided to continue it, I’d read more. If you decide to write something new, I’ll also read that! I will say that this is the first erotic story I’ve read that referred to a pussy as a “love-box”. Is that a slang term where you live?

Rancher46Rancher46almost 2 years ago

What a great ending or is it. I can see a lot of future adventures of these two and adding Jenny to the mix just makes the story really sexy. I can see a story where Jenny, Jeff and Chrissy end up in a polygamous relationship with Jenny and Chrissy have his kids and Jeff marrying Chrissy. Look forward to more of the adventures of these three? Well done. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story. Not quite the end though is it?

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I’ve just submitted ‘Stepsister’s Sleepover part 4’ for publication and I’m thinking of redoing and merging parts 1 & 2.

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