All Comments on 'Sticking My Nose In'

by Cromagnonman

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Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

A great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

KRD19254KRD19254over 2 years ago

Croma is this the start of your new story-line, like a Hallmark noisy investigators or a "Hart to Hart" ?

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Jacinta got off even when she had all the lab/devices to make placebo's in her basement box? Who gave husband #3 those placebo's and knew she was killing him, Jacinta. Those pill containers were of killing husband #1. What about husband #2 death and husband #3 death, too many loose ends? Or the story moved to fast near at the end requiring large assumptions.

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4.8, Hooyah...

wapentakewapentakeover 2 years ago

Another excellent story. Five stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thanks for another terrific story. I look forward to each one you write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What utter bullshit! She's almost raped and she grabs his dick?!?!

texstertexsterover 2 years ago
Good story with choppy dialogue

The dialogue was a bit choppy throughout this one, but a good story with plenty of requisite twists. Have to agree with the other commenter that it’s unlikely an almost raped victim would be groping the twig and giggleberries of her rescuer at the scene, but heck, it’s fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I usually like your stories, but you lost me on page one. A woman who is nearly raped, moments later grabs a stranger’s dick to see if he’s gay? Totally unrealistic. As another commenter said- utter bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

4 outta 5

Some have said there are lotsa holes in the plot, but although it's not classed as humour/satire there is enough there for me to say it's all tongue-in-cheek.

Lighten up folks, okay, & many thanks to you Cromagnonman :)

GoldenmuseGoldenmuse3 days ago

A very humorous romp. I think it would make a good stage play for dinner theater.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...