by Cromagnonman
Croma is this the start of your new story-line, like a Hallmark noisy investigators or a "Hart to Hart" ?
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Jacinta got off even when she had all the lab/devices to make placebo's in her basement box? Who gave husband #3 those placebo's and knew she was killing him, Jacinta. Those pill containers were of killing husband #1. What about husband #2 death and husband #3 death, too many loose ends? Or the story moved to fast near at the end requiring large assumptions.
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4.8, Hooyah...
The dialogue was a bit choppy throughout this one, but a good story with plenty of requisite twists. Have to agree with the other commenter that it’s unlikely an almost raped victim would be groping the twig and giggleberries of her rescuer at the scene, but heck, it’s fiction.
I usually like your stories, but you lost me on page one. A woman who is nearly raped, moments later grabs a stranger’s dick to see if he’s gay? Totally unrealistic. As another commenter said- utter bullshit.
4 outta 5
Some have said there are lotsa holes in the plot, but although it's not classed as humour/satire there is enough there for me to say it's all tongue-in-cheek.
Lighten up folks, okay, & many thanks to you Cromagnonman :)
A very humorous romp. I think it would make a good stage play for dinner theater.