by BaccaraFey
Another excellent chapter. I really like the fact that she is seeking a relationship and hoping that sex will make it stronger, rather than the opposite - seeking sex in the hope that it creates a relationship. It's rare here on this site and I appreciate it very much.
Great story, really lovely world building. Only one detractor: you could use an editor. Content was great but agreement/ tense issues were distracting.
Hot story you got going here, though a few grammar/tense issues here and there. Very sad there isn't more chapters after all this time.