by LadyJae01
I really like Your story a lot, its more true to life than most, and I hope that You will make this a series with parts 2,3, 4, and perhaps 5? Either way, Thank You! Your a good writer and I'll be watching ...
This was a beautifully written start to your story. A realistic yet totally sexy tale of seduction. I can’t wait to see more of your work.
Veronica xxx