All Comments on ''Stop' - A Magical Misadventure Ch. 01'

by Sasha K

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great!

Now...where is pt2?!

delightful_minddelightful_mindover 1 year ago

Great start. Can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really good, strong potential for several installments. Look forward to chapter 2.

CherryFrostedCherryFrostedover 1 year ago

This was great! This felt fresh and enticing for a magical item story. I'm hoping for more of a humiliation element in part 2 <3

Sasha KSasha Kover 1 year agoAuthor

Next chapter is submitted and awaiting publication. Looking forward to your feedback :)

Will527Will527about 1 year ago

Thanks for recommending this, it was hot! Nice job.

Will527Will527about 1 year ago

Worthy of a second read, loved it all over again!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent I really enjoyed this

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