All Comments on 'Store's Open Ch. 02'

Lucky guy!

Well written, quite nicely described, almost as if I watched , . .

What a lucky guy.

Can’t wait for the next episode.

Will both need some tutoring?

Most enjoyable follow up in this series. As I said previously I am really enjoying the simplicity of the yarn which in turn makes the story very relatable to my experience. Only criticism is minor. I found there were a couple of times when some repetitive description & phrases slipped into the narrative that had the effect of bringing this light & breezy reminiscence lose some of its appeal. This is just a point to be watched not worried over.