All Comments on 'Store's Open Ch. 03'

Can’t wait for the threesome.

Great writing!

Please add another chapter.

Thanks. I have been working on these for a while, trying to develop a story line that has real emotions, real movements, that reflect the lived realities of real people. I'm not sure if/where anything will go from here, but we'll see.

This is a such well crafted yarn. I have no hesitation in giving this chapter 5 stars especially when looked at the whole of the work. You’ve managed to continue to focus on the essential straightforwardness of the connection between the the characters without falling into the trap of so many authors who seem to get lost in analysis whether it of the action or emotions. Cheers & well done.