All Comments on 'Stories We Ruined Together Pt. 04'

The “handplay” scene may not be dramatic enough for her book (unless a romantic comedy of sorts), but close to real and entirely consistent with your characters and their relationship — awkward, tentative, humorous for the reader, and just erotic enough. Some have argued that in well crafted erotic fiction, the sex reflects/is the storyline; the storyline is reflected in the sex. Very creative writing.

Very erotic scene, a lot more realistic than most stories here. Ed should have left the mess between them so they could peel each other apart in the morning, just joking. I'm enjoying this story very much so far.