All Comments on 'Stormy Monday'

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OberurselOberurselalmost 20 years ago
wow

Extraordinary. This has to be one of the hottest stories I've read in a long while.

lohengren99lohengren99almost 20 years ago
excellent

Realistic scenario, developed characters, excellent descriptions. All in all, an excellent story.

Nightowl21Nightowl21almost 20 years ago
A hot story

Very good story. Wondering how theyll play out the distance when she returns to school. Jim might be making long weekend trips.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great story

nice story, very hot, how about a part 2

jezebellajezebellaalmost 20 years ago
incredibly, wickedly hot

the teasing and build-up lead to one of the hottest daddy-daughter stories at literotica. very well done, both in dilaogue, action and sensuality. five melting stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great story, but.............

'It was a dark and stormy night'? Please tell me you used that opening as a joke. Other than that, awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Fantastic

Excellant

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
BEST STORY ON THE WHOLE DAMN SITE

best part was on the couch! keep it from mom... its far more hot that way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
excellent

absolutely brilliant story, more pls pls.

cwb123059cwb123059almost 20 years ago
Great Story

That was a very hot story. I would like to read more of these two sneaking around right under the old dried up lushs nose. And maybe the daughter kicking her mothers ass and becoming a full time slut for her father.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Well...

Haven't ever showed an interest in Incest stories till yours...you converted me, and I just can't stop....;)

David48David48over 18 years ago
A slut is as a slut does

Another bell ringer! My, my, such a dirty little slut for dear old dad. 'aren't you ashamed?' she asked him...NAH!

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