by frederickson866
Very good job. It read very smoothly and I never felt like anything could have been better if done differently. A story to be proud of!
The prior reviewer is kidding themselves! I couldn't count ALL the mistakes on Page 1!!!
A double fantasy: hot sex with a myriad of babes AND sailing the Great Lakes (though I prefer my Lake Michigan to your Huron).
Fun story. Can’t wait to read ensuing chapters in the series.
There is a link to part two but it doesn't exist. Great writing and look forward to the rest of it.
Enjoyable but a little predictable. Big cock and has sex with every female in sight?
Really enjoyable little fantasy. So what if everything was just a little too good to believe - that’s what fantasies are for. The errors were getting a little frequent and interrupted the flow, so it would be good to sort with Word/Google Docs, then Grammarly. ‘Doggie’ or ‘Doggy’ work, but not ‘Dogie’ which would be pronounced like ‘low’.