by employee007
I love strong dark hairy men, with Middle Eastern, Greeks, Turks, at the top of the list.
Good so far just hope it doesn’t get too dark and twisted. So many writers take it to far on here some time.
I enjoyed the story, even though musky scents and sweat etc are normally not my thing. I do hope you don't abandon the sissification theme - but that's my preference ofc :)
@Bham487 I agree with that sentiment! I had written a darker variation of the narrator's thoughts on some scenes and immediately could tell this was a terrible direction. The PoV character is awkward and weird - but he is not a misanthrope or a racist as he might be misconstrued by some people to be in the early chapter. Plus the tone of the whole story is clearly not serious even if it develops in a slow "realistic" pace.
Great!! Change it to Arabic from Farsi otherwise I am totally fucking horny for this story