All Comments on 'Straight Boy Makes Money Ch. 06'

Is it possible to see George and Daisy suffer some sort of karma in season 2? They obviously deserve it.

blody loved it and also think that karma should get George and Daisy

OMG, what an absolutely perfect ending to season 1 of Harvey's story. It's great to see someone finally stand up to people like this. When you stop to think about it, if Daisy hadn't revealed herself, Harvey's torture could have gone on indefinitely. By doing that she caused George to lose the only power he had over Harvey. So, in a way the bitch actually screwed herself and George out of the fun they were having at Harvey's expense. Like the first two commenters, I would also like to see George and Daisy receive the payback they deserve and hopefully we'll get that in season 2. I've loved all 6 chapters of this story, but for this ending alone I'd give you ten times ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ if I could. Fantastic job!!!

Loved the whole series. I agree with the other comments crazy Daisy and that weirdo George deserve some type of karma.

This ending was simply PERFECT! God, after everything George and Daisy made Harvey go through seeing him simply walk out and decide to accept who he is was amazingly cathartic! Thank you!

Ayo my boy Harvey stood up to himself, even tho he was sort of groomed or manipulated into being this way he accepted himself in the end

I liked this, missed your writtings Twistedmanc

Can we please have a new “Turned Out“ entry? Please 🙏

Even if I generally enjoy dark endings, I'm glad he decided to accept himself and didn't become the slave of some horrible persons :)

Loved it, bravo! Concur with the other commenters – screw Daisy!

A request for the follow up story: please have Harvey quickly resume control over his NoodMe account by contacting the webmaster (they have his verification face photo for confirmation) and getting his blackmailers out of the loop!

Loved seeing how this ended. The minute daisy revealed herself as a cheater, I knew she and George lost all leverage. There was no reason for Harvey to give a damn anymore.

Would be nice to see George trying to go back to Harvey, like misses him, maybe Harvey becomes a sort of power bottom for George with him only be able to get hard by thinking of Harvey. As for Daisy she is a fucking sociopath, the less she is mentioned the better

Great story!!!! Looking forward for Season 2.

I appreciated the uplifting ending, the cutting out of manipulative elements aka George and Daisy. While the blackmail was hot for a time, that time ran its course as you said so good on you for recognizing when to end that part.

I look forward to season 2.

I LIKED THE ROUTE!!! YOU DIDN'T CHOOSE THE GENERIC CUCKOLDRY AND YOU LET HIM EMBRACE FOR WHO HE WAS.

thank you!

I love how you write, you make me so worked up!

This was a phenomenal outcome. Too often does the main turned out character just have to take it, but you turned it on his head. Harvey still gets to be a gay bottom, AND Daisy and George get screwed over? I never thought I'd say these words on literotica, but...

That was based as hell, 10/10

This was the greatest outcome the story could have ended with. So hot the entire time but Harvey finally figured out who he was and wasn’t going to play these games anymore. A realistic story too. This is probably the best story I’ve read here ever.

really enjoy this story. hope Harvey gets some type of revenge yknow maybe go after Daisy's father? Seduce him.

Also what ever happened with the coworker?

I read the whole story and it was wonderful. I really really enjoyed it ;)

Couldn't finish, too stupid.

Normally I'm into the cuckold stories and I always fantasize about being my wife's cuckold in real life -- but the ending of this story was really FANTASTIC !!! Being able to live in the open as "bi" or even "gay" is wonderful and I'm sure such a relief for Harvey not to have to hide his secret life any more. Also, finding a wonderful man like Jimmy to continue having hot gay sex is something I wish for in my life.

I'm looking forward to the next season of Harvey's sexual adventures. Keep up the great writing.

I'm so glad it ended the way it did. When you teased that it might have been daisy's dad, I found that hot but as soon as it became daisy cheating and manipulating him into becoming a cuck I lost all interest in the story and just wanted to see how it was going to end.

So glad he broke up with her and just came out to Tom and also loved how good of a friend and accepting Tom actually was.

OMG I loved this series, you are such a great writer. George and Daisy were dirt, I am happy how you brought Harvey through this, Bi or Gay he is a man and deserves to be loved. I will say though a little too much with the butt plug, I have found I can only go a couple of hours with one in my ass before I need to take a shit. But other than that it was a GREAT series.

I thought this was a well written story. I can't wait to read season2. It kept me wanting to read more and more

The entire series so far has been well written. Also Tom is a bro and we love him for it. Please continue writing this. I would love to see either his revenge arc or his self love arc.