by trueorfalse78
The story has potential to be a really good one, but for that you need to re-read what you write, and detailing everything a lot more. Right now it's short, simple, everything happens really easily, and it's not believable.
Unlike so many other stories here, this one could actually happen. Good story!
Very hot, I loved how everything worked out. Your story got me all hot and bothered too. 10 stars for you. 🤤
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I would love for this to happen with me and my wife. She definitely needs to get fucked by a big cock while I definitely love being fucked by a well-hung hunk of a man. I would love for her to walk in and see my getting fucked and sucking cock. I hope to make it happen one day.
from the author, trueorflase78, Thank you all for your kind comments, I do hope my grammar will improve over time to make my work an even more enjoyable read.