All Comments on 'Stranded in Paradise Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Really?

Tedious with the unnecessary phonetics. Jiggle=giggle?

Unrealistic

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsabout 8 years ago
so....

Her breast did not laugh.

Giggle is a form of laugh.

Well, I guess that's a good thing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Just another incomplete story…probably for the best anyway

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