All Comments on 'Stranded Pt. 01'

I really liked it and would like to see the story continue.

This is awesome. Wonderful depiction of a family coming together sexually. So hot and loving. Please please please continue this. Hopefully James getting pegged spurs him, his dad and uncle to explore being filled with the real thing. Let everyone in the family enjoy sex with everyone else in the family. So hot

I loved your writing. It is a great story and I hope that the next chapter comes out soon. The only thing I saw wrong is you changing name. Janet to Jen and Melody to Melisa. Keep on writing.

Not your typical incest story! Fantastic! Interested to see where the author leads us in the next chapter.

Very hot erotic fun story to read..enjoyed it... five stars

Wow! HOT!

Sorry, this was really going good and real hot. Then became more than just fantasy. Should have had the brother and sister doing things before, and maybe of had the brothers doing the sub mother before. Even though the mother had never been with a woman. Crazy as hell, but at least possibly believable. Everyone suddenly going crazy is not, unless the daughter quietly slipped some mood altering drug into something they were all drinking. A re-write would make a lot more interesting and believable story.

Bit wild and unlikely but entertaining. Who is janet todger missed that