All Comments on 'Stranded Pt. 01'

by GlasgowSlaveGirl

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I kind of like it. Have to see where you head from here.

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Submisky35Submisky35about 1 year ago

Interesting so far. Will have to see where it goes from here. Well written, but for some spots where wrong words crept into sentences. Another proof-read or so before publishing would probably help.

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