by medasinman
She wasn't stranded...she was a whore...If she stopped it was because she found another lover better than him....1*...This was a good fantasy...Or a good play between a couple...Like this was just like two dogs fucking...no feelings in it...
Too bad there's not a nightmare category. Will you write about the dissolution of her marriage? Such contempt for her husband and her marriage, lack of self respect, and risk taking, is pretty much a 4-lane highway to divorce. Hope she enjoys the ride.
Loved it. Got me so wet. Totally need to leave my keys in my car sometime ;-)
Where's the consequences; where's the tension. You could have just as easily been announcing a baseball game. The only difference is the baseball game would be more exciting. There's a lot of writers on this site that create fantastic Loving Wives stories. They don't have to always be BTB or RAAC stories either. Their stories are written such that the consequences match the actions of the characters.