All Comments on 'Stranded Seduction in Summer Shower'

I'm stranded in your story and may need a cold shower! I hope we will hear more from these two characters. Thanks!

Wonderful!! Where have you been hiding, 3P??!! Encore!

I need more, so much more

It was like trying to read a book covered in shadows. You introduced the idea of 'The Order' for virtually no good reason whatsoever. If you take them completely out of the story and introduce some other villainous influence, like maybe a supervisor at their job, you still have the same story. I actually fell asleep twice trying to read this. I'm glad that you wrote 7 more chapters to this story, but I almost feel like giving up right here. 3/5

I liked the trace of hair on his chest and abs. A great look on any man!